Week 8 Reflection

          This poem is about my journey from being a terrible poet to being a very decent one, and it isn't all thanks to the poetry blog assignment. It is about me being a bit sad about the assignment being done, because I enjoyed writing a new poem each week, but I recognize that it was fun and gained a lot from taking part in the blogs. I also had a lot of fun thinking of different rhymes and have gotten quite good at rhyming now which is something I was never good at. What I meant with the N.C. line was that they were the losers last year in the NCAA final, much like I was a loser at poetry, but now they are the champs, just as I am now good at poetry. My poem itself followed no specific structure, and had only rhyme. I wouldn't change anything because it was the last poem and like Kanye says, I should never regret my artistic choices.

Last Real Poem

I am a good poet now, but I used to be crap

so it has been a long writing journey.

I was a loser, but now I'm the champ

Like N.C. in the tourney.

I'm so popular, my name is written on totems,.

People read my poems as if they were the Torah.

I'm as passionate with poems,

As Osberg is with roasting Zamora.

I became a better writer by far,

But my eight weeks of spitting flame are done. 

I don't know how many good poets there are,

all I know is I'm the best one.

Thank you Mr. Osberg.

This is an image of Childish Gambino, who spits flame just like I do and just as I say I do in this poem.

Week #7 Reflection

This poem is about, in my opinion, one of the most annoying people on planet Earth, Darren Dimalanta. Even though I deeply despise him at times, I still consider him a friend, and a really good one at that. As I explained in the poem, he sometimes enjoys taking my phone and running until I catch up to him, which is one of his major flaws. The day I wrote this poem, Darren had taken my phone while I was playing Clash Royale, a 1v1 iPhone game, making me lose the battle I was currently playing at the moment. This really made me mad. When thinking about what I was going to write this week, I decided that there were many things I felt about Darren that I should get off my chest, which I expressed in this poem. I was trying to say that there is a side to Darren that I, and fankly everyone else, hates, which is when he thinks he's being funny but really he is being annoying and trolly. I would ot change this poem because I thought it was accurate and expressed my feelings for Darren at that moment very well. As for poetic language, I used rhyme and my poem was a couplet.

Darren Dimalanta

Out of all the people at school,
There is one who thinks he is fun and cool.
But all he really does is piss me off.
When he makes a joke I only scoff.

This man's name is Darren,
And even Mr. Osberg hates him.
He tries to take our phones and run,
But we don't think it's any fun.

Darren thinks he's the meme lord,
But he knows damn well that he's ignored.
Unfortunately, I consider Darren a friend.
But now I wish our friendship would end.

This picture relates to the poem because it depicts an unfunny friend's look of anticipation, such as Darren.

Week #6 Reflection

My "Friends Couplet" is about me showing my love for the TV show Friends. I have always thought Friends was a quality TV show but when I started watching it I realized it was the best. There were many times when I was sad or stressed about school where I found relaxation in watching an episode of Friends. This couplet expresses my love for the TV show and uses some characters as examples. I loved how cringy Chandler was and used it in the poem. I wouldn't change anything because it is a good couplet and I know I showed that I love the show. As for poetic language, I used rhyme and made Gunther sound like he was cool by saying he was a boss, but this is also true because he was the boss of the coffee shop. This is a double entendre which is a double meaning for a phrase, like Gunther being a boss.

Friends Couplet

My favorite TV show is “Friends”,

I’m sad when an episode ends.

My favorite character is Rachel, 

But Chandler’s jokes are painful.

I can’t deny that I love Ross,

But Gunther is the biggest boss.

Every episode makes me happy,

Even though Phoebe is kind of crappy.

This picture relates to the blog because I love watching friends and it will always be my favorite tv show.

Week #5 Reflection

This poem is about the rage that a certain videos game, FIFA 17, causes its gamers, including me. The creators of FIFA are called "Electronic Arts", or EA. The term that people use to describe the recurring BS that one faces while playing FIFA is "EAids", which is the title of my poem. What I was trying to say while writing this poem is that I experience EAids way to much, and this causes me to get extremely angry. However, this doesn't stop me from continuing to play the game, as it is indeed a very fun game to play when you are good. I would not change absolutely anything because my belief stands firm: I hate EAids and FIFA itself at times. This poem also shows that I am no longer mad about school or work, because I have everything worked out in that aspect of my life. The fact that my anger is mostly at a video game shows that I have nothing else to really be angry about, so everything is going very good right now. I did not use any poetic terms other than making my poem a haiku.

If you don't understand what EAids means or what it makes people do, please have a look at this short, 6 minute video. You will not be disappointed:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kilVPLg6JRM